I think you've done a wonderful job with this Black*Rock Shooter cosplay. You can definitely carry the costume, and the make-up isn't overpowering which makes the look softer and more natural, but is still striking with the lovely light blue. The wig is a little bit messy, but only a little. Posing behind a fence is always an effective tactic, and I think you've made a good decision using this picture. It makes the mood a little sad and longing, kind of like you're trapped. But, that bright painting/image in the background is a little too bright in my opinion, and since it is so fluro and noticable it kind of takes away from the focus on your gorgeous cosplay. Next time, maybe aim to make the background and/or surroundings a little darker for this sort of picture to suit the mood? But I understand, being an amateur cosplayer myself I know it can be difficult to find a good area to take photos. xD Anyway, keep up the good work! You've done a good job and you've got some great potential for even more outstanding cosplays in the future.